Talk:Mansur ibn Lu'lu'/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:35, 28 January 2017 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:35, 28 January 2017 (UTC)
- No DABs, external links OK
- Move the Duchy of Antioch article to the Bibliography and add the full range of pages to the entry.
- Add the full range of pages for the Basil II article in the Bibliography
- Standardize spelling of Brill
- Add ISBN for Amabe's book.
- One duplicate link
- What's a ratel?
- Probably best to delete mention of the robes.
- Link dinar
- On 7 January 1016, Fath recognized Salih's rule, an act which took Mansur by surprise; Mansur believed that Fath handed over the citadel to Salih and fled Aleppo that night with his sons, brothers and a few of his ghilmān. This doesn't make sense to me. The first half of the sentence doesn't lead properly into the rest.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:16, 3 February 2017 (UTC)
- @Sturmvogel 66: Thanks for taking the time to review this. All your points have now been addressed—sorry for the delay. --Al Ameer (talk) 21:25, 22 February 2017 (UTC)