Talk:Manganese/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Tea with toast (talk) 04:46, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
Review summary
[edit]I find that this article sufficiently meeting the Good article criteria:
- Article is very well written.
- The text is accurate and is supported by reliable references.
- The text sufficiently covers the main aspects of the topic.
- Article is written in a neutral tone.
- Article is stable.
- Article contains appropriate and helpful images.
Tea with toast (talk) 17:52, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
Suggestions moving forward to Featured article review
[edit]This article is one of the best articles I've read in reviewing GA nominees, and I find it is mostly ready for FA review as it stands. --Tea with toast (talk) 17:52, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
A few minor changes might be helpful:
- In the "Occurrences and production" section, there are photos of manganese ore and Psilomanganese (manganese ore); however, I could not find what distinguishes these two different ores in the text.
- I find the third paragraph in "Occurrences and production" to be a bit confusing. Also, the term "ferromanganese" is first occurs there but the subsequent paragraph suggests that ferromangaese is produced, not mined. I would create a new paragraph (or expand the second paragraph) describing the different types of ore.
Further comments
[edit]- The phrase "undergo a sort of resettlement" is used twice; once in the intro and the other in Geology. I recommend finding a different term that wouldn't cause repetition. I also went ahead an made a grammar fix. Codyorb (talk) 14:40, 22 August 2020 (UTC)