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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 08:38, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 08:39, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Plot

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  • Wikilink "Salsa dance" and write a capital S for Salsa.
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Production

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  • "Reliance Entertainment presented the film." — by presented, do you mean "co-produced and distributed"?
Yes. Rephrased the same. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Neetu Chandra, who worked with Kumar on Yavarum Nalam (2009), made a cameo appearance in the film." — Is this mentioned in ref no 19?
Yes. it is, but the film's name was mentioned as 13B however. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Due to Nageswara Rao's death, a song's tune was replaced with another and a few lines of the song Nenu Puttanu from the film Prem Nagar (1971)." — do you mean "another" as in "another tune"?
Yes. Rephrased the same. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wikilink "goatee".
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "left Switzerland on 18 June 2013" — did she leave the country (or) is it "left for Switzerland"?
The latter. Rephrased the same. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Present the full form of BITS Pilani for more clarity.
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wikilink "backwaters".
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Release

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  • Wikilink all districts, cities and countries (except those that already have a wikilink).
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:13, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Can you rephrase "platinum disc function". (better, you can add a footnote about what it is).
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:15, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Write the full form of "TRP rating" and, if possible, wikilink it.
TRP is linked but is it necessary to write its full form? Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:15, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
If it is wikilinked, then no problem. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 16:17, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

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  • In the critical reception section, remove the italics from Cinemalead, Sify, Oneindia Entertainment and IndiaGlitz as they are websites, not newspapers.
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:18, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the overseas portion of the BO section, some places it is spelled "US", in other places, it is "United States". Rewrite it as "the United States".
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:21, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

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  • Provide sources for notes a and c.
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:10, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Provide a source for note e.
Wiki itself has no source for the same in its related article. Let me find if any. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:21, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Upendra helps me, but is this sufficient enough for the note? Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:25, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Pavanjandhyala: Yes it is, change 0.5 million to 50,000 and cite this source. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 16:29, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:29, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  • Rewrite Oneindia.in as Oneindia.com as Oneindia.in is a redirect.
 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:10, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
    Pass or Fail:

@Pavanjandhyala: Congratulations on your 6th consecutive GA. — Ssven2 Speak 2 me 16:35, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Finally, after a really huge struggle, i could achieve in my goal of giving a tribute to ANR. Thanks for reviewing. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 16:37, 24 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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