Talk:Man on the Moon: The End of Day/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: — Legolas ^(talk2me) 13:56, 1 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I really like album articles where exactly everything is perfect. Well Crystal girl, here's to you, very few concerns..

In the infobox, the recording date range should be 2007–09

done

Allmusic shouldn't be italicized.

done

never try to mix politics or witty things in with his lyrical conten... --> Witty things seems a little unencyclopedic prose, rephrase.

I have replaced the word with jocular.

Monster Ball Tour --> Wikilink needs to be corrected

done

In commercial performance, you say that the album sold 500,000 copies and was certified. --> You know what to correct :P

oops. done

Pitchfork MEdia in critical reception should not be italicized. Actually see this throughout the article will you?

done

Tracklisting: Can you include the total length of the album somewhere there? I think there is a provision for it in the {{tracklist}} template.

Since the album is broken into many sections I couldn't use the regular tracklist =/. Instead I have listed the total length for each chapter and listed the albums full length in the tracklist section.

In the charts, the word Billboard should be mentioned only for Billboard 200 and Billboard Hot 100 as that is exactly their chart name. Remove the word Billboard from the R&B anbd Rap charts. Their wikilink is enough.

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Some of the online sources are coming as italicized in the references like Ultratop, MTV etc. Give a thorough run-down throughout the article.

done

You can add Category:Albums certified gold by the Recording Industry Association of America.

done Crystal Clear x3 21:14, 2 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

On hold for seven days. — Legolas ^(talk2me) 12:37, 2 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Seems fine. I'm placing this as GA. Congrats on your 30th(?) GA and my 50th review. Wine please... — Legolas ^(talk2me) 06:33, 3 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]