Talk:Man Overboard (Man Overboard album)/GA1
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Reviewer: DannyMusicEditor (talk · contribs) 00:29, 25 April 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this in a week or two. Finals are finished on May 2, so I'll be fine, so long as I remember. If I haven't started by May 12, ping me.
- First and foremost, I'd request you add the sources in the refideas template, unless that content's already there. I promise I won't fail it for that reason, but I won't pass it until you do either. dannymusiceditor oops 20:37, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
- Done added. Yeepsi (talk) 21:01, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
Dabs and Checklinks
[edit]You have a dead AbsolutePunk reference, and New Found Glory is linked twice in the body.
- Removed Yeepsi (talk) 22:56, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
More coming.
Background and recording
[edit]I'm a day late. Let's get this show on the road.
- with New Found Glory guitarist Steve Klein acting primarily as producer,
andwhile also providing additional engineering. - Cannon and Klein provided an "outside perspective," according to Wildrick. This is unclear. An outside perspective on what? Do we know?
- Reading the next sentence, I now see its relation, but I shouldn't have to ask myself what it was. Combine them somehow. "The pair" refers to Cannon and Klein, right?
Composition
[edit]- Who's Eisenstein?
- Section is quote-heavy. "never played anything that fast", "I guess we did it the opposite.", "'Not the First' a challenge" to "get good enough with all the transitions that I felt confident tracking" - all of these can be prose.
- "Headstone" being the H2O song is referring to H2O (American band).
- "Somethings Weird" should be "Something's Weird"
- Back cover lists it as "Somethings Weird". Changed all mentions of "Something's Weird" to "Somethings Weird". Yeepsi (talk) 20:29, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Acceptable. dannymusiceditor oops 21:29, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Back cover lists it as "Somethings Weird". Changed all mentions of "Something's Weird" to "Somethings Weird". Yeepsi (talk) 20:29, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
Release
[edit]....should be retitled to "Release and promotion".
- That's all I got. The last sections I can't complain about. dannymusiceditor oops 19:46, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Done everything. Yeepsi (talk) 20:29, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Ok. EZPZ good article. ✓ Pass dannymusiceditor oops 21:32, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Done everything. Yeepsi (talk) 20:29, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- That's all I got. The last sections I can't complain about. dannymusiceditor oops 19:46, 13 May 2018 (UTC)