Talk:Malta at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Yellow Dingo (talk · contribs) 00:04, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
Will do soon. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 00:04, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
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[edit]- "Olympics Chetcuti" → "Olympics, Chetcuti"
- "athletes the" → "athletes, the"
- "Overall she finished 53rd out of 78 runners overall" - remove one of the "overall"s
- Removed the first mention of "overall" MWright96 (talk) 14:30, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
- "is objective was to do his best and in the event he performed well, he would be at a same level of his rival competitors." - should have quotation marks
- added quotation marks at "to do his best" MWright96 (talk) 14:30, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
- "said "C" → "said, "C"
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[edit]Great article, putting on hold. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 10:02, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
- @Yellow Dingo: I have made the changes you have suggested. Is there anything else that needs addressing? MWright96 (talk) 14:30, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
- I'm now satisfied this meets the criteria. Passing. Congrats. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 21:49, 8 November 2016 (UTC)