Talk:Malta/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: --12george1 (talk) 03:53, 2 February 2011 (UTC)

After finishing the review, I have to fail this article, you may re-nominate after you revise the article.--12george1 (talk) 03:53, 2 February 2011 (UTC)

General

Nearly the entire article is unreferenced.

Somethings are grossly over-linked, such as "Valletta".

Lead

None of the kilometers have the conversion to miles

I don't think there should be things like "(since [year])", revise it so that there isn't any of that in parenthesis. For example: "It is a member of the United Nations (since 1964)"; revise to something like "It has been member of the United Nations since 1964"

Etymology

Why is there "𐤈𐤄𐤋𐤀𐤌"?

Military

There is no conversion to miles for "250,000 km2" at the end of the second paragraph.

Geography

The word metres should abbreviated, specially 253 metres (830 ft).

Climate

It is unnecessary to have the suffix at the end of the dates, like February 19th should simply be February 19.

"In total 6 months – from June to November – the average sea temperature exceeds 21 °C (70 °F)." - spell out 6.

Economy

Since you have the American version of the dates, there should be 1 May 2004 or 8 January 2007, rather, May 1, 2004 and January 8, 2007.

Banking

Date inconsistency is present again: 17 April 1968, 4 May 2005, and 1 January 2008.

Transport

There is again occurrences of inconsistency with dates.

"This will include a day service from 6am to 11pm and a night service from 11pm to 6am." I am assuming this is in the timezone of Malta, but other people may not know that.

Reference

The following references are "deadlinks": #12, #27, #43, #60, #80, #85, and #106.

References #52 and #80 are simply a URL, and should have the title.