Talk:Male Unbonding

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Date	Process	Result
May 10, 2008	Good article nominee	Listed

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Elaine

This is not the first episode to show Elaine. I say we delete the line. 64.122.95.110 14:34, 26 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I believe this was refering to the production order. I fixed it so it makes sense now. BocoROTH 07:51, 27 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Review

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

I've put the GA nomination on hold. The prose needs some work and there is some trivial information. Otherwise, this is in good shape. Let me know if the following issues have been fixed or if you disagree with any aspect of my review.

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
The prose is somewhat choppy. This is a minor problem throughout the article. For instance, there are a couple of instances where three sentences in a row start with the same word and the lead needs a copy edit (but these are not the only problems). I'd like to see this improve before I pass the article. I'll help out where I can.

B. MoS compliance:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:
I've passed this, but with a minor stipulation. Can it be confirmed that the Nielsen rating for this episode comes from the DVD commentary? If so, that's great. If not, it needs to be removed.

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
There are a couple of rather trivial pieces of information in the Production section. This is probably nitpicking on my part, but I'd like to see those removed.
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Other Observations

Although it can clearly be inferred from the text, the article never mentions that this is a season one episode (excluding the infobox). This should probably be mentioned in the lead and in the Production section.

I've tried to make the improvements that you asked for and I think that it is now good enough to pass. ISD (talk) 08:58, 9 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

You're very close. A few things:

~~The lead is supposed to be a summary of the article, but it doesn't contain any information from the Reception section.~~
I've changed my mind. Seeing how it hasn't won any awards, this probably isn't necessary.
The third paragraph in the production section contains five consecutive sentences that start with the.
The last three sentences of the Production section would be more appropriate in the second paragraph.
I'm still unsure if the Nielsen ratings are sourced in the DVD. If so, good, and if not, then it's probably worth it to find a source. If no source can be found, then I suppose that the ratings can be removed from the article.
What happens to Kramer's pizza place idea?

Please let me know when you've made these changes. Ice Cold Beer (talk) 01:19, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've made the changes you've asked for. ISD (talk) 07:21, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I agree. The article now passes the GA criteria. Nice work! Ice Cold Beer (talk) 07:43, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Male-Unbonding

The DVD titles this Male-Unbonding, which a hyphen. Should this be renamed? – kentyman (talk) 03:28, 7 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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