Talk:Maldives at the 1988 Summer Olympics

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Review: May 2, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 00:38, 1 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello once again! I will get to this within seven days. Please note that I am returning to GA reviewing after an hiatus, so please WP:TROUT me if I make a mistake. Thanks, ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 00:38, 1 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

There we are; another short but sweet article in Maldivian Olympics! I have placed this article on hold for now and left my comments below. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 17:21, 1 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@LunaEatsTuna, all done. Thanks again. -- EN-Jungwon 01:29, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You are welcome :) Pass per the changes implemented. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 01:58, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio

Earwig says good to go. No concerns from me either.

Files

Good to go. Only file, File:Flag of Maldives.svg, is public domain.

Prose

The lead sentence looks slightly jagged to me. How about something along the lines of "The Maldives competed at the 1988 Summer Olympics in Seoul, South Korea, from 17 September to 2 October 1988. This marked their first time participating in the Olympic Games."?
"and no Maldivian has won a medal in any events." – change to "and no Maldivian has won a medal at the Olympics." as events could be confused with individual events at the Olympics.
"parade of nations of the opening ceremony." – wikilink to 1988 Summer Olympics opening ceremony.
"for the Maldives during the parade of nations of the opening ceremony." – wikilink these two as they are in the lead.
"going on to represent the Maldives at the 1996 games." – in which city? Also;
Wikilink 1996 Summer Olympics.
"(men's 100 metres and men's 200 metres)" – could these be wikilinked to somewhere like the men's 400 metres is?

References

Good to go, RS; formatted correctly; passes spotcheck on refs 1, 4 and 9.

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