Talk:Malawi at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Yellow Dingo (talk · contribs) 12:44, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
I'll take a look soon. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 12:44, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
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[edit]- "début in the" → "début at the"
- Done
- "field athletes:" → "field athletes;"
- "swimmer," → "swimmer;"
- "début in the" → "début at the"
- That first "background" sentence: You go from saying they participated in nine games to talking about games they missed. I would put a full stop after " London, England" and then reword the start of the next fragment to form a new sentence about missed games.
- "since Swaziland" ?
- I should really notice these things but corrected. MWright96 (talk) 07:35, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- in the background section, you say they could select two with wildcards but you don't say how the 3rd qualified, and who it was. Per the gender thing it would have to be either Simukonda or Tafatatha.
- Tafataha qualified via a universality place in her swimming event. The main FINA source does not list her name. MWright96 (talk) 07:35, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- "win an heat" → "win a heat"
- Done
Overall
[edit]Nice article with a few minor issues. Putting on hold. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 06:47, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Yellow Dingo: Thanks again for taking time to review. Is there any other issues? MWright96 (talk) 07:35, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- No more issues, passing. Congrats! — Yellow Dingo (talk) 07:36, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Yellow Dingo: Thanks again for taking time to review. Is there any other issues? MWright96 (talk) 07:35, 24 October 2016 (UTC)