Talk:Madagascar at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 14:02, 11 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

May as well take this one as well. Courcelles (talk) 14:02, 11 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Was their Paralympic debut in Athens or Sydney? Lead and body contradict themselves.
Be explicit that the Federation Malgache Handisport is the NPC of Madagascar.
"Temisy Aristide Andriamahavonjy who departed for Rio de Janeiro on 2 September" This sentence needs work, it makes it sound like only Temley left for Rio on 2 Sept.
"than ttake" Fix the ttake.
In the table, "1500 m T45-46" should be using an endash, not a hyphen.
What was his finish in 2012 to compare?
What was gold medal time in the 1,500m (to compare it to this athlete's performance)?

That's all from me. Courcelles (talk) 14:09, 11 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- @Courcelles: Have done all of the points raised above except for his 2012 time because he took part in the men's 200 metres T46 competition in that year and thus no comparison can be made. MWright96 (talk) 15:15, 11 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Very good, promoted. Courcelles is travelling (talk) 12:10, 12 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]