Talk:MacGyver (2016 TV series) season 4

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:MacGyver (2016 TV series, season 4)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:59, 1 February 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good, but remove the hidden note in the "|num_episodes" parameter.
• The use of "The series" in the second paragraph sounds repetitive. Maybe change "The series stars" to "It stars".
• Additionally, combine the first two paragraphs, as they seem short when separated.

Cast and characters

• Is there a reason why some characters have descriptions, and others don't?

Episodes

• Is there a reason why some characters have the name of the actors who portray them next to their names, and others don't? (I would remove them).
• "Aubrey, Mac and Desi" → "Aubrey, Mac, and Desi"
• "Mac to join her, but fails" → "Mac to join her but fails"
• "super weapon" → "superweapon"

Production

Development

• "claimed were not true" → "claimed was not true"
• "CBS later decided" → "As a result, CBS later decided"

Casting

• Put James Murray, Sal Vulcano, Joe Gatto, and Brian Quinn in parathesis as the sentence structure makes it seem as if The Tenderloins and the group were different people.
• Additionally, could you replace the reference after their names with something that's not a press release, such as this article from Meaww?
• Same thing for the reference for Tate Donovan and Peter Weller. Maybe change it with this and this, since press releases really don't count as "secondary sources".

Viewing figures

• 6.192 rounds to 6.19, not 6.20. Please change this in this section and #Episodes.
• "7.04" → "7.05" per this reference.
• For only episode 8, change "1.34" to "1.35" per this reference.

References

• Link Mitch Metcalf in each citation using his name.
• Try linking each website to their Wiki-articles.
• Since it's only a part of the citation, the "Updated: ShowBuzzDaily's" part of the first 13 references can be capitalized per MOS:ALLCAPS.

Overview

GAN table

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Notes

• @TheTVExpert: I have added most, if not all of my comments. This article is well-written, but has some issues to address. Please add comments, and ping me back when you have done so. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 23:59, 1 February 2021 (UTC)

• @Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. TheTVExpert (talk) 15:24, 2 February 2021 (UTC)

@TheTVExpert: I think you forgot to change "Aubrey, Mac and Desi" to "Aubrey, Mac, and Desi" and all uses of "super weapon" to "superweapon" in #Episodes. Once you do that, ping me again, and I will promote this article. Additionally, there's one reference (currently #20) with the website parameter as just "Deadline", so change that to "Deadline Hollywood". Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 15:36, 2 February 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. TheTVExpert (talk) 16:29, 2 February 2021 (UTC)