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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:21, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • SIRI is noted but then never used.
    • minus Removed
  • You use GPS without explaining it first.
    •  Done
  • "(called Subway Time),[1]" the only thing referenced in the lead. Move it to where it's discussed in more detail in the main body.
    •  Done
  • "stop.[2][3][4][5][6]" do we need five citations, see WP:CITEKILL?
    •  Done
  • "receive SMS information" I think you really mean "information via SMS".
    •  Done
  • "affixed to bus stop signage.[7][8][2][3][4][5][6] " seven references?? And out of order.
  • "phones.[2][3][4][5][6]" again. This is prevalent in this article so could we address it generally?
  • "The current Bus..." bus appears three times in one sentence.
    •  Done
  • "OneBusAway" link is a bit easter eggy, could link to the relevant section?
    •  Done
  • "... was also involved in the development. The MTA uses servers also .... also" three times in three sentences.
    •  Done
  • Bus Trek could be created as a redirect here.
    •  Done
  • "and Portland, Oregon have" comma after Oregon.
    •  Done
  • "NYCT Buses" why capital B?
  • "a control center in East New York, Brooklyn, " this depot has already been linked earlier in the section but its geographical location is only noted this time round.
    •  Done
  • "to interference from" was it more the case that the skyscrapers blocked the signals rather than introduced interference? In radio communications interference is something quite specific...
    •  Done
  • " of the same name.[31][32][17][33]...." seriously, just one ref would do here!
    •  Done
  • "April 6, 2012[37]" comma after 2012.
    •  Done
  • Ref 35 en-dash, not spaced hyphen.
    •  Done
  • AVOID SHOUTING in ref titles.
    •  Done

The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 13:28, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

As always, looks good to me. Happy to promote. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:32, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]