Talk:MAX Light Rail/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: 1.02 editor (talk · contribs) 12:17, 6 March 2020 (UTC)
Hi, I will be taking this review. 1.02 editor (T/C) 12:17, 6 March 2020 (UTC)
Comments
[edit]The article is very nicely done and at first glance easily passes all 6 GA criterion, but there are a few issues that have caught my eye.
- 'frequent headways of 15 minutes, 30 minutes off-peak' it would be better if you could clarify if the headway is 15 to/or/and 30 minutes, and if it is 30 minutes I don't think that can be called frequent for a light rail system.
- Reworded to make it simpler.
- In the last paragraph of the lead 'consists' links to 'Train'. To avoid confusion i suggest using train thought the article as '2 car trains' is a lot more common than '2 car consists'.
- "consist" is the correct American English term for "train". This is mentioned in that article, Train#Other countries.
- The description of what MAX defines a line as could be put in a note.
- I simply followed the example of New York City Subway (GA article) which also explains this weird thing the US does with its train routes. I think the situation is unique enough to warrant an explanation in the prose for non-American readers so they aren't led to assume any incorrect information.
- There is a Portland Streetcar system also, and i feel like there should be a {{for}} template at the start of both articles to differentiate between the two.
- Done.
- I cant find mentions of a depot in the article, unless the maintenance facilities double up as a depot
- Yes, those are the depots.
- The image caption for Washington park station should also mention below the ground.
- Missed this. Done. --Truflip99 (talk) 06:58, 8 March 2020 (UTC)
- It is mentioned that the mall station is permanently closed and Kings hill station is temporarily closed as of now, but in the infobox it only says 1 station is temporarily closed
- That's correct. Kings Hill station is the only one that's temporarily closed.
- Then it should say something to the like of '94 (1 permanently closed, 1 temporarily closed)'.
- Prior to March, it was 97. I just subtracted all three closures but mentioned the one temporary as it may open again. Does it not make sense? -Truflip99 (talk) 07:35, 8 March 2020 (UTC)
- Ah i see, ok then.
- Prior to March, it was 97. I just subtracted all three closures but mentioned the one temporary as it may open again. Does it not make sense? -Truflip99 (talk) 07:35, 8 March 2020 (UTC)
- Then it should say something to the like of '94 (1 permanently closed, 1 temporarily closed)'.
- That's correct. Kings Hill station is the only one that's temporarily closed.
Hold
[edit]Just a few issues to be fixed before I pass the article. Putting it on hold now. Thanks 1.02 editor (T/C) 06:11, 8 March 2020 (UTC)
- @1.02 editor: Thank you very much for taking this on so quickly. I have addressed all of your comments. Please let me know if you require anything else. :) --Truflip99 (talk) 06:56, 8 March 2020 (UTC)
- @Truflip99: All but one of the issues have been resolved, but it is a relatively minor one so i will proceed to pass the article first. Nice job with the article! 1.02 editor (T/C) 07:27, 8 March 2020 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.