Talk:M-24 (Michigan highway)/GA1

GA Review

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• 1a) First sentence of sec 1 3rd paragraph a bit hard to read.
  • South of the T County line comma
  • "South of Caro" and "in the city limits" - doesn't that conflict?
  • And then - sounds like a run-on
• 1b-5) good
• 6) Might be good to have an image of the road itself; not an issue for GA.

• On hold Great article, just needs a few fixes. --Rschen7754 (T C) 18:20, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
  • Sentences tweaked. Imzadi1979 (talk) 19:36, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
  • Passing... --Rschen7754 (T C) 20:12, 8 October 2008 (UTC)