Talk:Lydford Castle/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 06:41, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

I'll start this one shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:41, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

• passed to the Duchy of Cornwall, who would own it until Wouldn't "who owned it until" be a more direct phrasing. Or this: time, being repeatedly "time, was repeatedly"

• Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:04, 13 January 2013 (UTC)

• Typo isolatedm and here: protected by a the ramparts

• Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:04, 13 January 2013 (UTC)

• This is awkward: From the end of the 12th century the output of tin was increasing efforts were taken to extend the regulation and generate more revenue for the Crown.

• Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:04, 13 January 2013 (UTC)

• And this: The courtroom included a chair for the Stannary court judge, with railing around the outside

• Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:04, 13 January 2013 (UTC)

• • Pics are appropriately licensed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:21, 13 January 2013 (UTC)