Talk:Luton Town F.C./GA1

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(rush into room in best Eric Morecambe impression)....right then, let's go. I will place some notes here and will do some straightforward copyediting as I go. Feel free to revert any change which inadvertently alters the meaning. Casliber (talk · contribs) 13:24, 3 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The lead is a little slim, and could do with another important fact or two. Done Cliftonian • talk

Luton Town's most recent spell as a major club began... - "Luton Town's most recent successful spell began..." (the club didn't change per se) Done Cliftonian • talk

but the conversion of the Kenilworth Stand to an all-seater wasn't fully completed in 2005 --> "until 2005"? Done Cliftonian • talk

There is also an animosity - I'd remove the 'an' which looks funny. Done Cliftonian • talk

For aesthetics you could combine a few stubby paras. Done

Any idea who was behind the funny colour changes? Also, any other celebrity supporters apart from Morecambe?

I would assume it was the club's board. On the celebrity fans front, I'm not sure they are relevant to the article. Cliftonian • talk 14:50, 3 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Nearly there, prose is a little choppy and I had a bit of a run through - I can let it slip for GA but would need some polish for FAC. Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:31, 3 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, done and dusted :) Casliber (talk · contribs) 06:16, 4 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]