Talk:Lurie Children's Hospital/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 17:20, 18 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass
Pass/Fail:

Since the lead is a summary of the article and refs should only be used for contentious subjects, can the 360 beds reference be moved to the body?
Please wikilink U.S.News & World Report

References 13 & 14 don't support sentence
Can some of these one-sentence lines be connected into a paragraph?
Wikilink Ray Kroc
In 2006, hospital administration had announced plans to build an entirely new children's hospital closer to downtown Chicago and closer to the campus of their academic affiliate, Northwestern University. needs a reference
- Also, I suggest merging it with the 2008 sentence since it seems odd to jump from the 1980s to late 2000s
Please merge On June 9, 2012, the hospital moved from their old campus to its current location in Streeterville, in a coordinated move of 200 children that took over 10 hours with The hospital also changed its name to Ann & Robert H. Lurie Children's Hospital of Chicago & Ann Lurie stuff paragraph
reference 46 doesn't mention the Fire Department
Fix reference 61
Wikilink COVID-19 pandemic
- May, December, and 2021 can be one paragraph

The history section can probably be one paragraph
- Please Wikilink Black Lives Matter
  - Also, remove HealthLeaders as the author of reference 93

Please ensure that all references linking to a newspaper are cited as Cite news not Cite web (such as reference 1)
Please ensure consistency with dates in references (ie. reference 95 says 11 April 2020 while nearly all the others are 2021-01-17)
Reference 17, 18 need website name
Reference 34 needs the author