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Comment: Hi @Kaliper1: This is a very decent and well-written piece of work! I only have a few minor concerns. Firstly, Weixinyidu, Global Times (source 9, quoted from Sina), and China Central Television are not reliable sources. The first one is user-generated content, and the last two are deemed unreliable per consensus (See WP:GLOBALTIMES and WP:CGTN), so you may consider replacing them with better sources. Secondly, the last paragraph in the Southern Crossing section is not cited. I believe it should be cited with one of the sources listed previously in the same section, but was left out, so I will leave this for you to add the appropriate citation. Lastly, I think his death may deserve a new section, so the "In 1795, 19 years after..." paragraph may need to be rewritten and placed under a new subsection called Death or something like that. This is not compulsory, and I leave the decision to you, but I personally think it would improve the flow of the article. I have also done some minor tweaks. As I said this article is very well-composed, so none of them are big deals. Just remember to italicize newspaper names per MOS:ITALIC for future edits. Please reach out to me on my talk page if you have finished revising or need any further assistance. Cheers and happy editing! —Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul）01:08, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: Hi @Kaliper1: This is a very decent and well-written piece of work! I only have a few minor concerns. Firstly, Weixinyidu, Global Times (source 9, quoted from Sina), and China Central Television are not reliable sources. The first one is user-generated content, and the last two are deemed unreliable per consensus (See WP:GLOBALTIMES and WP:CGTN), so you may consider replacing them with better sources. Secondly, the last paragraph in the Southern Crossing section is not cited. I believe it should be cited with one of the sources listed previously in the same section, but was left out, so I will leave this for you to add the appropriate citation. Lastly, I think his death may deserve a new section, so the "In 1795, 19 years after..." paragraph may need to be rewritten and placed under a new subsection called Death or something like that. This is not compulsory, and I leave the decision to you, but I personally think it would improve the flow of the article. I have also done some minor tweaks. As I said this article is very well-composed, so none of them are big deals. Just remember to italicize newspaper names per MOS:ITALIC for future edits. Please reach out to me on my talk page if you have finished revising or need any further assistance. Cheers and happy editing! —Prince of Erebor（The Book of Mazarbul） 01:08, 17 July 2024 (UTC)