Talk:Luis Ibáñez/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 01:50, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status. I expect to post a full review within two days and will notify the nominator then. Jezhotwells (talk) 01:50, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Disambiguations: none found

Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 01:51, 24 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Checking against GA criteria

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
The article is very poorly written, needs a thorough copy-edit throughout. You may be able to enlist help from the WP:Guild of copyeditors. Currently this is a long way away from meeting critirion #1 of the WP:GACR.

The lead does not fully summarise the article, see WP:LEAD
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
Sources appear reliable and back up statements, although I have to assume good faith as I only relying on machine translations.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
Broad and focussed
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
NPOV
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
No edit warring
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Licensed and captioned
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
ON hold for seven days for copy-editing. Jezhotwells (talk) 16:46, 27 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Well there have been a few minor edits but nothing resembling a full copy-edit and no response from the nominator, so I will not be listing this at this time. When it has been copy-edited, take it to WP:Peer review and when any points from that have been addressed, re-nominate at WP:GAN. Please check the WP:GACR and make sure that any future nominations meet all of the criteria. Jezhotwells (talk) 11:50, 6 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]