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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:22, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:22, 14 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

  • There's nothing at all outside his baseball career. No personal life info, high school notes, anything. For an active player in particular there will be at least something out there.
  • "In 2006, he was clocked at 3.4 seconds from home plate to first base on a bunt." This doesn't seem to have a purpose in the lead; fine to have in the body though.
  • URLs need accessdates in the refs, and some are missing publisher info.
  • "He was named an Arizona League All–Star for his performances" performance.
  • The professional section should at least start with when he was signed by the Padres organization.
  • Rookie-level, as well as the other A-class notes on first mention, should be linked to minor league baseball#the appropriate section there.
  • change Rule V Draft to Rule 5 draft.
  • "he dropped fly ball from" a fly ball.
  • This should have a non-baseball person look through it for jargon use.

This article has some good points, but it would take some effort to get it to GA status. As a result, I'm going to fail this currently. Once all the issues are fixed, and perhaps after a PR or copyedit, it could be renominated. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:41, 15 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]