Talk:Lucy Kaopaulu Peabody/GA1
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
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- No DAB links
- No dead links : http://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn85047084/1898-06-24/ed-1/seq-7/ and http://www.nhch.com/cms/View.aspx/Show/OurBenefactor-LucyKalanikumaikiekieHenriques are dead.
- User:Iazyges. Fixed the link to https://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn85047084/1898-06-24/ed-1/seq-7/. It just missing an s. Had to toss the second because it is no longer retrievable one and added alternative sources instead.
- No missing citations
Prose Suggestions
[edit]Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
- she helped re-establish and became the second founder of the Kaʻahumanu Society, a female-led civic society chartered during the Hawaiian monarchy. suggest:
- she founded the reestablished Kaʻahumanu Society, a female-led civic society chartered during the Hawaiian monarchy.
- @KAVEBEAR: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 10:30, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
- Changed prose as suggested. KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:25, 23 July 2018 (UTC)