Talk:Love a Woman/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 14:45, 7 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Might as well remove the Released parameter in the info box.
The song was initially written for Knowles' fourth studio album 4 (2011) but she thought that it didn't fit with the sound of it and decided it would be better if she recorded it as a duet with Blige. → Originally written for Knowles' fourth studio album 4 (2011), the singer felt that it did not fit with the sound she had created for her album, and she thought that it would be better if she recorded it as a duet with Blige instead.
while BridgeTown as the additional producer for the song. → Sounds like a word is missing? while BridgeTown served as the additional producer for the song.
The complete song was released on November 17, prior to the release of the album. → Do you mean leaked? As it wasn't a single. Released implies that it has been given official release, but if it was released before the album, then it was either official premiered? Or it was leaked.
Team S. Dot served at the co-producer of the song while BridgeTown as the additional producer for the song.[1] On November 9, 2011, a snippet of the song appeared online.[2] The complete song was released on November 17, prior to the release of the album.[3] The song was initially recorded by Knowles for her fourth studio album 4 (2011), but she thought that it would be a better fit as a duet with Blige. Blige further revealed in an interview that the song was sent to her after Knowles thought that it didn't fit her album and it was sent through her A&R people. → Replace some of these in bold with "it" or "Love a Woman", too much repetition.
FN2: Rap Up needs linking
On the contrary, it should be unlinked in FN6.
Billboard and PGM need linking in FN9

Status

On hold. — AARON • ^TALK 15:54, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Everything

Done. My love is love (talk) 22:44, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. — AARON • ^TALK 10:09, 11 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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