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This review is going to be declined because the nominator has selected themselves as the reviewer, which cannot be done. I urge the nominator to re-nominate the article, taking care not to select themselves next time as the reviewer. Regards, Spintendo07:24, 29 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Much of the added information contains company-related minutiae which was published at a time when journalistic safeguards against conflicts of interest were not in place. Thus, the information gleaned from these primary source documents must be viewed with caution, while the article uses too many of them, and not enough WP:SECONDARY sources. I've placed the {{POV}} maintenance template to advise editors of the need for possible copyediting to further improve the article. Regards, Spintendo08:01, 29 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]