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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
- General
- Overall, in this article, I see lots of curly quotes, when regular ' quotes should be used, rather than ’ curly quotes
- Whoops. I think I got them all now.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
- I did a little copy-edit
- Thanks!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
- Lede
- NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC), as per MOS:ACRO, for its first mention
- Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
- Plot
- "$"? US dollar? Canadian dollar?
- "don't", "doesn't". Don't use contractions. Write out fully as "did not", "does not"
- Production
- "Lotto" was written by co-executive producer and frequent series writer Charlie Grandy." reference?
- It's the one after the Krasinski info. I bundled it at the end rather than repeat it.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
- "The official website for The Office", don't think that's important to the subject
- I've only included it because all of the other season 8 articles use similar language. I don't want to start using a different format randomly in the middle.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
- Perhaps add TV rating from NBC.com
- Cultural references
- Nothing to be found
- Reception
- Ratings: What channel was it on? It's nowhere to be seen.
- % → percent
- first-season → first season
- References
- Why do some references use the UK format (Ref. 17), and some use US format? Please only choose one
- I think they're gone now.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
- Ref. 2: "The Office, season 8" Season should be in capitals, since its like that on the URL
- Double quotes (") should be single quotes ('), as per WP:MOS guidelines
- TV by the Numbers is published by Zap2it
- Ref. 13 should be regular quotes rather than curly quotes
- Ref. 12 has WP:DASH problems
- Is "Screencrave" a high-quality source?
- It has and editorial staff and I've used it for various other articles (mostly these season 8 ones) that have passed GA. If this was going for FAN, probably not, but for GA, it should be good enough.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
- Some references have publishers, some don't. Please add to all of them, or remove from all of them
- External links
- No problems
This article is in good shape, and will be put on hold for the minor issues above. Cheers, TBrandley 17:56, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
- Awesome! Thanks for the quick review.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
- Your welcome. Article appears good. Pass. Well done! TBrandley 18:51, 3 September 2012 (UTC)