Talk:Lost in Your Light/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Ashleyyoursmile (talk · contribs) 05:25, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Hi, I shall take on this review. --Ashley yoursmile! 05:25, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks great
from Lipa's eponymous debut studio album (2017) → for Lipa's eponymous debut studio album (2017)
It was written by → The song was written by
written by Lipa, Miguel and Rick Nowels, and produced by Miguel and Stephen Kozmeniuk → written by Lipa, Miguel and Rick Nowels, while production was handled by Miguel and Stephen Kozmeniuk
The song was released for → It was released for
for digital download and streaming through Warner Bros. Records as the album's sixth single on 21 April 2020 → for digital download and streaming as the album's sixth single on 21 April 2017 through Warner Bros. Records
Can "R&B-pop" be targeted to its appropriate page? If so, do the same in the infobox as well

Targeted to Contemporary R&B as R&B (pop) redirects there. LOVI 33 15:30, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Its lyrics talk about → The lyrics talk about
Link "music critics" to "music journalism"
from music critics: the singers' vocal performance was praised, but Miguel's guest appearance was criticized → from music critics, who praised the singers' vocal performance but criticized Miguel's guest appearance
Link "certification" to Music recording certification
The song's music video premiered on 26 May 2017 → The music video was directed by Henry Schofield and premiered on YouTube on 26 May 2017
It was directed by Henry Schofield and filmed in Los Angeles → "Filmed in Los Angeles," then add something about what the video features
with performances in BBC Radio 1's live lounge → with performances on BBC Radio 1's live lounge
Mention "Glastonbury Festival" instead since that's how its written in the main body. No need to pipe-link

Done

Background and composition

as one of the last songs for Lipa's debut album → as one of the last songs for Lipa's eponymous debut album
as "one of the happiest" song from the album → as "one of the happiest" songs from the album
Link "chorus" to "refrain" on the caption of the audio snippet
Can the caption of the audio sample be expanded a bit? Perhaps add something about the chorus?
Again can "R&B-pop" be targeted to its appropriate page?
Link "rhythms" to "rhythms"
Link "percussion" to itself
Link "grooves" to "groove (music)"

Done

Release and promotion

released for digital download and streaming through Warner Bros. Records on 21 April 2020 as the sixth single from Lipa's debut album → released for digital download and streaming on 21 April 2017 in various countries by Warner Bros. Records as the sixth single from Lipa's debut album
"It was later included as the second track on the album, released 2 June 2017" Remove this sentence since you have already mentioned that the song was released as a single from the album

Not done, it is notable to include its track list placing. LOVI 33 15:48, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Mention when the song was serviced to contemporary hit radio in both countries
Mention the dates of the performances of the song

Done, also replaced citations for date confirmation. LOVI 33 15:48, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

Merge this section with "Commercial performance" and re-title to "Reception"
mixed reviews from critics → mixed reviews from music critics
Craighead labelled it a "pop banger," → Craighead of The Fader labelled the song as a "pop banger,"
and praised the chorus as "catchy." → and praised its chorus as "catchy."
"Rap-Up praised the song" → "Rap-Up commended the track" to avoid repetition
called the song "starry", and Wass praised the production and vocals → called the song "starry", with the latter complimenting the production and vocals
Miguel's guest appearance, writing he "he gives it → Miguel's guest appearance, writing "he gives it
as well as praising its "sensual side", different from Lipa's previous releases. → and likened its "sensual side" for being different from Lipa's previous releases
Bianca Gracie of Fuse praised the singers' "smooth-as-velvet" vocals → Bianca Gracie of Fuse appreciated the singers' "smooth-as-velvet" vocals
After this sentence of Fuse, merge the next paragraph with this paragraph
For Rolling Stone, Ryan Reed labelled the song "seductive" and Miguel's appearance "passionate." → Ryan Reed from Rolling Stone regarded the song as "seductive" and Miguel's appearance as "passionate."
list, with its description being that it is "a starlit rollerskating → list, with the publication writing that it is "a starlit rollerskating

Done

Commercial performance

This section should start as the second paragraph of "Reception"
The song departed the chart the following week, lasting two non-consecutive weeks, re-entering at number 98 after the release of its parent album on the chart dated 9 June 2017. → The song departed the chart the following week, re-entering at number 98 after the release of its parent album on the issue dated 9 June 2017, lasting two non-consecutive weeks
In February 2020, the song received a silver certification from the British Phonographic Industry (BPI). → In February 2020, it was awarded a silver certification from the British Phonographic Industry (BPI), for track-equivalent sales of 200,000 units.

Done

Music video

Can you mention if the music video premiered on Lipa's YouTube channel?
It was directed by Henry Schofield → The video was directed by
She begins to kick up her legs where three people → In the following scene, she begins to kick up her legs when three people
A group of dance join them, snapping → A group of dancers join them, snapping
are then seen walking towards one and other on a ledge, → are then seen walking towards each other on a ledge,
in the parking lot, → inside the parking lot,
Reed viewed the visual as "minimalist," → Reed of Rolling Stone viewed the visual as "minimalist,"
Mark Braboy called the visual "alluring" and state dit captures → Mark Braboy called the visual "alluring" and stated that it captures
The word "praised" has been used way many times. Try to use alternatives of the word instead

Done

Track listing

Great

Credits and personnel

Use {{spaced ndash}}
Should "synthesizers" be used instead of "synths"?

Changed. LOVI 33 16:22, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done

Charts

Great

Certifications

Great

Release history

Great

References

Copyvio score is 13.8% which is super!
MOS:CAPS issue with ref. 3, 16, 26

Changed to Title case. LOVI 33 16:39, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

For ref 18, use iTunes refs instead for a few countries. You can refer to Black Swan page. You can do it for 3-4 countries. Wikilink on iTunes Store should be on the first mention

Replaced with media release citation, the single was removed from iTunes after the release of Dua Lipa. LOVI 33 16:38, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

iTunes Store on ref 21 should be cited as a publisher. Use refs for various countries like the previous one.
Celebmix on ref 40 should be cited as publisher

Done

Outcome

On hold for 7 days. Great to do this review. Good luck! Ashley yoursmile! 07:42, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ashleyyoursmile I have addressed all your comments. Is there anything else I can do? LOVI 33 16:39, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

LOVI33, Great work. Gladly passing this. ✓ Pass Keep up the good work with Dua Lipa's articles. --Ashley yoursmile! 17:05, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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