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Too promotional

This article has quite a few passages that read like promotional material written by the college's PR folks. No doubt they were lifted straight off their website. Prime example: "The college boasts enviable transfer rates...." (Yeah, and this article boasts an enviable transfer rate from the Pierce website!) Cgingold (talk) 17:12, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've removed most of the puff. Is that better? MixedMartial1984 (talk) 20:37, 10 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]