Talk:Look Mickey/GA1

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 04:55, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead is a bit short. Could it be expanded upon a bit more?
- O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:05, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Details --> Description
- Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:51, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Critical review --> Reception
- Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:51, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Look Mickey is broad comedy and falls into the category of slapstick..." --> Who said this quote?
- fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:08, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The work is also considered reflexive. --> What is reflexive?
- I think I am trying to say the artist is painting about himself. Did I word it incorrectly?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:52, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Was actually not aware of that word before now. Should link it to Reflexivity (social theory); I'm sure I wouldn't be the only one. Statυs (talk) 06:13, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Not sure that is the proper link, so I expanded the prose.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:36, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Overall, the article is well written and well sourced. No other issues from those stated above.

All issues have been addressed. Passing the article! Great work! Statυs (talk) 06:40, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]