Talk:Loetoeng Kasaroeng

Loetoeng Kasaroeng has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
August 26, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 31, 2012.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Loetoeng Kasaroeng was the first film produced in what is now Indonesia?

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Loetoeng Kasaroeng/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 14:17, 25 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Wow that was fast. Thanks! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:19, 25 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for thanking me! I going to do the review right now. Cheers, TBran dl ey 14:31, 25 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox: Why is it shown as "December 31, 1926", there, in the infobox, and shown as "31 December 1926" in release section. Please choose only date format.

That's what I get when I forget to run my scripts. Done

Lede: "it is also the first film to feature a native Indonesian cast" remove also, makes it look weird with the rest of the sentence.

Done

Production: "mostly" → "generally"

Done

Legacy: "writes" → "wrote"

Done

References: Footnotes and Bibliography should be sub-sections as per MOS:ACCESS

They are (check the code)

External links: TV.com link?

Not on that site. Most Indonesian films have poor entries on the usual EL destinations, if they have them at all.

External links: Add a portal box, with "Film portal" and "Indoesnia portal" in it.

Done

External links: Categories below should be sorted in alphabetical order

Done

Wow; great work. This is in great shape, but will be put on hold for now until those very little concerns are fixed. Article is pretty solid. TBran dl ey 14:41, 25 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Done all. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:33, 25 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Well done. Pass! TBran dl ey 15:16, 26 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]