Talk:Lockheed L-193

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It seems like a lot of the info in the lead is just repeated in the following section. I know that one purpose of the lead is to summarize and give a snapshot of the article, but it seems some of that info could just be deleted from the lead. Thoughts? HotshotCleaner (talk) 20:16, 7 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Editing

Also, after doing a lot of copyediting, I think the tag could be removed. If at least one other editor agrees, I think we can take it out. HotshotCleaner (talk) 20:17, 7 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]