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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:08, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 20:08, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good.
- Change "which CBS intended to draw" to either "which CBS created with the intention of drawing" or "which CBS hoped would draw".
- Done
Premise and characters
[edit]- No problems here.
Production
[edit]- The reference right after "ELP Communications" is a citation to the first episode. This should be replaced with a secondary source.
- It is sourced directly from the episode's credits, which is consistent with WP:PRIMARY. Kind of like how music credits are sourced directly from the liner notes using cite av media. I have watched the episode myself so I know these are true.
- Same issue with the reference after "the Castle Bryant Johnsen-designed title sequence".
- Same as above; there isn't any mention in a secondary source but it is given in the credits, so the episode is cited directly.
- Remove the third reference after "Happy Together" per WP:OVERLINK and since it's a primary source.
- The first two references there cite the fact it is a cover of "Happy Together"; Ray Colcord being the composer is only mentioned in the third reference, which is in the episode's credits.
Episodes
[edit]- The notes after "Directed by" and "Written by" should look like notes (efns), and not like a reference.
- Converted.
- Additionally, the note near "May 8, 1989" should be lowercased per consistency with other articles.
- Done.
Broadcast and cancellation
[edit]- No problems here.
Critical reception
[edit]- Since its a new section, the entire name David Bianculli should be present rather than just his last name.
- Done.
- The sentence "because the rest is trashy" is not in quotes or in the clipping, so I would reword or remove it since it doesn't have the tone usually present on Wikipedia.
- It was an attempt at paraphrasing; removed.
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Notes
[edit]- @Heartfox: This article is in great shape but could use some small adjustments. I have just finished adding most, if not all of my notes for this review, so feel free to add comments and message me back. I hope I can promote this article to GA-status really soon. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 16:26, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: thank you very much for your review. I have made edits to the article and have responded to your comments above. Heartfox (talk) 20:53, 16 January 2021 (UTC)