Talk:Literary devices in The Lord of the Rings/GA1
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Reviewer: CipherSleuth (talk · contribs) 02:09, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
- Many thanks for taking this on. I'll respond to your comments today, but will have less availability over the weekend. Chiswick Chap (talk) 03:38, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
- Nice job on the article. I'll go over it a couple more times to check against the GA criteria, but looks in excellent shape. If I find anything else I will let you know, otherwise, I anticipate passing the article. CipherSleuth (talk) 21:17, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, I am planning to review the article. I have pasted preliminary comments below. CipherSleuth (talk) 02:09, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Small fixes:
- The first time Jungian archetype is used in the character pairing section, there is no wiki-link.
- Added.
- Reference 5 appears dead. I click on it but says resource not found.
- Archived.
More general comment:
- The character Gollum is pictured at the beginning with the caption: “The scholar Brian Rosebury considers Tolkien's narrative portrayal of Gollum (pictured) his most memorable success.” After reading that caption with mention of "most memorable", I thought there would be discussion of Gollum in article, but there’s only a brief mention of Gollum in the character pairing section. I wonder if there is an opportunity to add about literary devices connected to Gollum e.g., if any of the sources talk about symbolism or metaphor regarding that character.
- Yes, added in 'Prose style'.
- In the prose section, it says that the prose style was "attacked" by Stimpson and Raffel. There's a mention of Stimpson's criticism (who thought the diction was too complex) but no mention of what problem Raffel had with the prose. Might be worth adding a sentence with additional criticism from Raffel.
- Added.
- Part of one of the sentences in the lead is a little challenging and might not be that accessible to the reader. Specifically this: "...a sequence of tableaux, a complex edifice, multiple spirals...". I don't know if this can be simplified any for the lead or add a wiki-link to tableaux. On the other hand, I guess the argument could be made that the reader just has to scroll down to learn more.
- Linked and glossed.
Reviewer has checked the article against the GA criteria, including examining references, prose, and images. Nominator has addressed concerns outlined above. Article passes.
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail: