Talk:List of Hersheypark attractions
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[edit]Many of these ride descriptions are too informal, too conversational. I also removed several instances of POV language ("obligatory wet drop," "dressed-up go karts"). This could be a lot more consistent, from line to line, and a little more professional. PurpleChez (talk) 16:33, 31 March 2011 (UTC)