Talk:List of islands of Perth, Western Australia/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 07:36, 4 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

This is a stand-alone list, meaning that it is not eligible to be a good article, as per Wikipedia:Good article criteria#What cannot be a good article?. You can consider nominating it featured list candidates instead, but I am afraid there is no "good list candidates" page. Here are a few comments on possible improvements for the page anyway:

This is an article about islands; it's odd to open with a claim about Perth's ecosystems.
"safe refuge" is a little evocative; not the most neutral of terms.
Do any of these islands have a human population? That would be important information?
Every entry should have a source (or collecton of sources) which can support all of the information in the row. Some entries are apparently unsourced (e.g., the entry for Bird Island).
Some of the sources look less than ideal; scholarly, governmental or journalistic sources should be available for this kind of information. members.iinet.net.au, for example, probably does not meet the reliable source guidelines.

I hope these brief comments are helpful to you; best of luck taking the article forward. Josh Milburn (talk) 07:36, 4 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]