Talk:Lisa on Ice/GA1

GA Review

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• "In order to pass and get the straight A grades she desires" I would change the verb "get" to one of a more specific meaning.

Other than a couple of minor changes, this is the only change I would suggest. I'll leave it up to you to change it, because it does at the moment still make sense - just I feel it would be better with a less vague verb. Otherwise, feel free to have a look at my changes and make any alterations you feel adequate.

In the long run, good luck with any future improvements with the article. It's another good read, well-structured and easily meets the GA criteria.

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Peanut4 (talk) 23:16, 6 October 2008 (UTC)