Talk:Liquorice (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 10:21, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

• and was later released commercially --> in what format?

• Done Simon (talk) 12:05, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

• In support of the song itself and 1991 --> remove itself

• Done Simon (talk) 12:05, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

• The music sample you can use the {{listen}} template and add it in the composition section. At present its WP:NFCC#8 criteria is in question
• Liquorice" was described as an acid house track --> By?

• Done Simon (talk) 12:05, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

• a house song produced by British electronic musician Lone, who also produced "Liquorice" --> Contradicts with the infobox

• Matthew Cutler is Lone's birthname. Fixed this. Simon (talk) 12:05, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

• "Harlem-street-slang-derived wordplay," --> quotes before comma

• Done Simon (talk) 12:05, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

• Banks posted "Liquorice" onto her Tumblr account --> on her Tumblr

• Done Simon (talk) 12:05, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

• On a mixed review --> In a mixed review

• Done Simon (talk) 12:05, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

• The live performances do not have any review associated with them? It seems so incomplete

• I'm finding sources. Thanks for the review! Simon (talk) 12:05, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

On hold for seven days, I would suggest further improvements to song content. You can ask my help also if you want. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 10:21, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

@HĐ: any luck? —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 07:12, 2 June 2015 (UTC)

@IndianBio: I think that's all I could do. :P Simon (talk) 04:36, 6 June 2015 (UTC)

Ok then, passing. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 06:36, 6 June 2015 (UTC)