Talk:Like I'm Gonna Lose You/GA2
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:26, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
Will begin soon. JAGUAR 11:26, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]- "The song features fellow American singer John Legend" - 'fellow' sounds a bit weird. I would remove it
- "and conveys the message to not take time with ones you love for granted" - how about and conveys the message to not take time with loved ones for granted
- Merge the two latter paragraphs of the lead into one as it improves prose flow
- "She premiered the music video at Times Square on July 9, 2015" - in Times Square
- No dead links
After reading through this a third time I conclude that it meets the GA criteria, since all of the issues (and more) have been addressed from the previous GAN. It is well written, comprehensive, and all of the sources check out fine. Well done! 
JAGUAR 11:47, 13 October 2016 (UTC)