Talk:Lifesong (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 04:35, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review

I'll be reading the article and doing some minor fixes were needed. —Hahc 21 02:37, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

The 'other uses' section is too short. Better if included on a bigger section.

Fixed.

Optional: An image could do well to the article.

Added.

Optional: A sample may be perfect.
~~On the 'Tracklisting' section, if "Perfect Day" is performed by another artist, it's recommended that you use {{track listing}} there.~~

—Hahc 21 02:47, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Verdict

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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—Hahc 21 13:05, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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