Talk:Lewis Manly/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:19, 22 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 07:01, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Notes

added several cats
added commons
"Manly as selected" Was
I hinted at Jweiss's talk page that i want him to add the record table, lol
shouldnt the championship go in the infobox
do you know if he played basketball all four years. Why does it say 1922 to 1925.
why is track in the infobox only 1924
I think you should expand the lead with his playing career
change external links to further reading
"which makes him the school's all-time winningest coach" not sure how old that source is but lets add that to the lead if true.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:27, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Closed with the nominator BeanieFan11's permission. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:19, 22 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.