Talk:Let Me Know (Tamar Braxton song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:28, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

and only included on the → and was only included on the record's

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Al Sherrod "A-Rod" Lambert, Tamar Braxton, → unlink Braxton here and only use her last name

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

and Harmony Samuels → you may use "while" here for a better flow

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

1976 single "(At Your Best) You Are Love". → you may just put the year in brackets after the title here to avoid repeition

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

complimented the visuals → there was only one music video, so please don't use the plural form

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

All on point here

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Background and release

and produced → you may use "while" for a better flow

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

included of a rapper → remove the "of" as it doesn't make any sense

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Due to the experience, she chose to avoid making hip hop music → what do you mean here? Do you mean she chose to never release a hip hop song in her future career?

Exactly. I have revised it to make it clearer. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Composition and lyrics

1976 single "(At Your Best) You Are Love" → same as in the lead

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

She talks about love saying → She also talks about love, saying:

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Well-written paragraph!

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

You should link "Music criticism" in "Critical reception" first

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:45, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Again, very well-written

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:45, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Commercial performance

number eight also on the same day → replace "also on the same day" with simultaneously

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:46, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Music video and promotion

directed the accompanying music video → directed the single's accompanying music video

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Throughout the video, Braxton → use "she" to avoid repetition

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

seducing the listener → who is the listener?

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Track listing

Flawless ;)

Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel

Fixed by myself...

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

Fixed by myself...

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Release history

Flawless ;)

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Other stuff

Copy-violation

30.1% is still acceptable!

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Media

Sample seems stable

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

References

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:50, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

No dead links! Good job!

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:50, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Outcome

Another well-written article from the Braxton series ! On hold for 7 days! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:28, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: Thank you for your review! I believe that I have responded to everything. Aoba47 (talk) 21:50, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Gladly passing this! Congrats; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:52, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: Would you have time to take a look at "Hot"? Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:08, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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