Talk:Lest We Forget: The Best Of/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 08:04, 3 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"The deluxe version of the record included bonus DVD" — "included "a" bonus DVD". Add the "a" there.
"Commercially, the compilation out-performed expectations in the United States" — Write it as "The compilation's commercial performance exceeded expectations in the United States"
"had sold over a million copies by late 2010" — Write it as "had sold over a million copies as of late 2010"
"Internationally, it was also successful" — Write it as "It was also successful internationally,".
Alt texts are needed for the images.
Who's "the band's frontman"? Manson? If so, just write his surname there instead.
"includes a DVD of sixteen of the band's music videos" — Write it as "includes a bonus DVD containing sixteen of the band's music videos"

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section:

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
Pass or Fail:

Thank you for addressing my comments, MagicatthemovieS. Congratulations, the article has passed. — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 11:24, 5 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]