Talk:Lesotho at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 12:43, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- I'll do these five over the next 24-48 hours. Courcelles (talk) 12:43, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- "This was the fifth time of the country competing "This just reads awkwardly.
- "being tested positive " Couldn't we just say "testing positive"?
- I think you've got at least one misspelling of Rio de Janeiro in the background section?
- The lead makes it sound like he was the original bronze medallist in both events before being disqualified, when it clearly wasn't the case
- Tell us how many runners overall for both track events.
- "athat he was tested " Lose the excess a, and change was to had.
- Did the CAS "quash" his appeal, or did they merely deny it?
That;s it from me for here. On hold. Courcelles (talk) 13:29, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: All of the necessary adjustments to the prose and clarifications have been made. MWright96 (talk) 14:23, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- @MWright96:, before I promote, can you check the caption of the image? Is "The Mosotho" a typo or intentional? `Courcelles (talk) 14:27, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: It was an intentional but I have rewritten the caption slightly. MWright96 (talk) 14:31, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- @MWright96:, before I promote, can you check the caption of the image? Is "The Mosotho" a typo or intentional? `Courcelles (talk) 14:27, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
- All good now, promoted. Courcelles (talk) 14:35, 10 November 2018 (UTC)