Talk:Leslie Andrew/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 13:25, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Will try and get to this some time on the w/e... Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 13:25, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Toolbox check

Fixed a dab link (typo really).
No EL issues.

Prose -- performed my usual copyedit, let me know if any issues.

Structure/detail/referencing -- all look fine.

Supporting materials

Infobox looks good.
File:Maj L Andrew.jpg -- can't see on site where this is CC-SA, looks like CC-BY according to what documentation I could find there
File:VCLeslieWiltonAndrewGrave.jpg -- if permission to use has been granted, I think we might need some evidence...

Summary -- all in all, looks good, but may need some clarity re. the images. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 07:10, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Have updated the licence for the first image (I think I found the same page you must have identified for the CC-BY licence). The other image came over from the Victoria Cross Reference site; not sure how to find evidence so have opted to remove it. Zawed (talk) 08:57, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

And thanks for the review (and the ce - I see I have a few bad habits to work on...) Zawed (talk) 08:58, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Not at all, you're doing fine, it's great to see another biographer of Commonwealth soldiers. Perhaps we should collaborate some time on getting Charles Upham to GA (or beyond) -- I have Mark of the Lion somewhere and have added bits from it to the article in the past... In the meantime, consider this as passed -- well done and keep it up! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 13:11, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]