Talk:Leonore Annenberg/GA1

GA Review

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   The only issue is the sentence "She graduated from Stanford University in 1940 with a Bachelor of Arts degree, and soon married Schenley liquors manager Lewis Rosensteil; they had two children but divorced." This would be best split into two sentences. Otherwise the article is well written. -Fixed

   B. MoS compliance:

   Please expand the introduction. You establish the subject well, but the introduction should also give an overview of the content of the article. -fixed

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   Well referenced.

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   Article overviews all major aspects of subjects life. However, future expansion is very possible. I recommend the book Legacy: A Biography of Moses and Walter Annenberg which would greatly help expand the entire article. One thing I remember is I believe Mrs. Annenberg was criticized at first when she started to redo the ambassador's home.

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

   No problems.

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

   No edit wars.

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   Image is usable.

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

   Image is relevant.

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Only the above two issues are keeping this article from good article status. My issues have been addressed.

Hi, thanks for the review. I believe that I have completed the tasks holding this article back from becoming GA. Thanks, Happyme22 (talk) 16:21, 30 June 2008 (UTC)