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Edit lead section for brevity, noteworthiness

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I think the lead could be more concise. For instance, I believe information about her baptism can be moved to the biography section. I also think that the introductory sentence could better showcase the subject's noteworthiness. Currently it states:

"Leonora Duarte (1610 – 1678?) was a Flemish composer and musician, born in Antwerp."

Where I think it could read:

"Leonora Duarte (1610 – 1678?) was a Flemish musician and composer who wrote the earliest music for viol by a woman in the 17th century." Ashedryden (talk) 20:31, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]