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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 06:44, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Picking this one up, review coming as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 06:44, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Early career

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Brentford

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Gillingham

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Cambridge United

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Port Vale

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Honours

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A few points I picked out on an initial run through. Placed on hold for now. Kosack (talk) 12:02, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • I've addressed those points and changed a few things around, added a little bit. Thanks.--EchetusXe 14:17, 13 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    A couple of minor points from a second look through
  • "extend his deal at the club.[41] However he left the club", the double use of club is a little repetitive here.
  • "He went on the make enough appearances", doesn't quite work.