Talk:Leo Burnett/Archives/2018

Article Evaluation

The article Leo Burnett is a decent article that provides a solid overview of the life and contributions of celebrated 20th century advertising executive Leo Burnett. However, there are also some problems with this article that should be fixed. For example, a general complain I would have for this article is the section on the company he created should have a more comprehensive overview of the company's history. More specific issues with this article are the fact that in the fourth line of the biography section there is no citation when claiming that he received a bachelor's degree in 1914. In the first sentence when the claim is made that the Leo Burnett Company "started with working capital of $50,000, eight employees and three clients" there is no citation to back up this claim. Overall, this is article provides a good overview on the life and career of Leo Burnett, however it could be vastly improved by adding these revisions. Ms1220a (talk) 03:24, 2 February 2018 (UTC)Marc Shapiro