Talk:Lena Rivers (1910 film)

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Review: June 2, 2015. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Lena Rivers (1910 film)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:59, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'm doing a GA sweep JAGUAR 20:59, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

Question: if a still image of the film exists, then can it be defined 'lost'? This is the most comprehensive 1910 film I've reviewed so far!
"The film follows a young woman who leaves home to search for employment and becoming married to a wealthy man" - this is a run-on, could be re-worded to The film follows a young woman who leaves home to search for employment, then after becoming married to a wealthy man
Nothing on production in the lead, so this does not summarise per WP:LEAD. Even mentioning a little about production would be great

Adding on to this, I would recommend a small expansion of the lead and a split into two paragraphs

"it is likely that numerous other character roles and persons appeared in the film" - people, or "actors"

Close - promoted

I was going to put it on hold, but nevermind, the content and references are all there, so this meets the GA criteria. I would recommend mentioning something about production in the lead JAGUAR 21:17, 2 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]