Talk:Leipzig-class corvette
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 04:50, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
Given I've done one of the class, I thought I'd pick this one up as well. A few comments:
- better off not starting a sentence with "And" → "And so Leipzig"
- Done
- perhaps put the range of boilers in the infobox?
- Done
- consider linking in the column headers of the table, keel laying etc
- I think bold text links are advised against
- add that the Civil War of 1891 was in Chile
- Chile was in that sentence at one point but must've gotten removed during a rewrite and I didn't notice...
- "being recalled to East Africa"
- Done
- suggest "She was raised in 1921 and broken up in the same year."
- How about just "that year"?
- images are all ok
That's me done. Nice work. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:04, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for another review! Parsecboy (talk) 10:18, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Peacemaker67: - is there anything else you'd like to see done? Parsecboy (talk) 11:59, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- No, just fell off my radar, sorry. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Nice work! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:59, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- No problem - I claimed and then forgot to do this one last week ;) Parsecboy (talk) 12:00, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- No, just fell off my radar, sorry. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Nice work! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:59, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Peacemaker67: - is there anything else you'd like to see done? Parsecboy (talk) 11:59, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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