Talk:Legends of Tomorrow season 3/GA2

GA Review

Passed. Vestrian24Bio 02:11, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 22:09, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Vestrian24Bio (talk · contribs) 04:33, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I will be reviewing this article, expect the initial remarks soon! Vestrian24Bio 04:33, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

@OlifanofmrTennant:

Update the article name at NFCC for File:Legends of Tomorrow season 3.jpg.
Remove the redundant |season_number= parameter from the infobox.
Per MOS:TVPLOT, plot summaries of no more than 200 words per episode should ideally be presented in a table...; ep 2 has 207 words.
Also, in ep 8 add This episode concludes a crossover event that begins on Supergirl season 3 episode 8, and continues on Arrow season 6 episode 8 and The Flash season 4 episode 8. as a note instead.

Vestrian24Bio 06:14, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Done the first three. Fourth the fourth I made it consistent with other Arrowverse season articles. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 06:59, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

2 bugs were found by the Project Check Wikipedia script, fix them.
- I cant figure out which refs have been duped. It appears to already have been fixed.
In ep 2, Sara tells the Legends about Mallus, an ancient archenemy of the Time Masters; he believes that the outlying anachronisms are Mallus' work. They disregard his warning.; is the 'he' and 'his' supposed to refer to Mallus, it sounds like referring Sara as a male.
- It's meant to be Rip warning them
References (as of this rev)
- Are refs 1, 3 and 11 needed? (tweets)
  - cut 3 and 11 kept 1 as is the start of filming, its an acceptable use of a primary source as Guggenheim was an executive producer
- Is ref 51 reliable? couldn't it be replaced by a better RS. Done
- Refs 57 and 113 are unreliable. Done
4th note needs a ref for being promoted to the main cast starting with "The Curse of the Earth Totem". Done
Shouldn't young Ray, Nora and Martin be placed next to their grown-up casts with an increased indent just like Clarissa... Not done
- No because the young versions only appear in a guest capacity where the adults are regulars. Both versions of Clarrissa are guests
Italicize Legends of Tomorrow in the cast section's hatnote - {{Main|List of Legends of Tomorrow characters|l1=List of ''Legends of Tomorrow'' characters}}. Done
Use the {{Cast listing}} template for the cast section.{
- Can't work out how to use it, additionally the template is usually used for movies not tv season

Vestrian24Bio 14:10, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Vestrian: Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 18:00, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Create a link to Waverider (character)#Television in first mention of Waverider on each sections. Not done
- The ship and characters are completely unrelated beyond the name. I've looked into any possible connection and most sources just a comic references
Create a link to List of teams and organizations in DC Comics#Time Masters in other media in first mention of Time Masters on each sections. Done
Link Anachronisms and Rip Hunter (Arrowverse) in the overview section. Done
When did the Legends attempted to time travel with two versions of themselves aboard...? Done
- Aruba (Legends of Tomorrow)
Add "As depicted in ...[ep]" note to the events from prior seasons along with {{cite episode}} refs. Done
In episode summaries, refer Damien Darhk as Damien instead of Darhk, to avoid it from being confused with Nora Darhk. - Done
Link ep 8 title to Crisis on Earth-X#Part 4 instead of Crisis on Earth-X. - Done
Create a link to List of DC Universe locations#Zambesi on its first mention. Done
In ep 11, She reappears in an empty Waverider, where she encounters Gideon's human form; he reassures her that she is alive in the medical bay, and he transported her to his program to convince her to stay with the Legends - is Gideon female or male...? Done
- Female
In ep 13, Damien tells Nora and Ray, a hostage - does hostage refers to Ray?
- Yep
  - Remove "a hostage", as its already said he was captured in the previous episode. - Done
Create a link to Memphis, Tennessee in ep 14. Done
In ep 15, Learning that Sara is using the Death Totem, John - change to Constantine. Done
In ep 18, causing him to kill Damien to be released - isn't he already released at the end of previous episode? Done
- Ray and Damien travel back in time. I've clarified the wording
In Guest starring section, move McComb previously portrayed this version of the character in "Pilot, Part 2" (2016) and "Compromised" (2016). to a note instead. Done
Add appropriate images adjacent to both casting sub-sections. - Done
Link Amy Pemberton, Gideon, Zari Tomaz, (at first mention instead) and Guggenheim in the casting section. Done
Does ref 90 cover the adjacent statement. - Done
- Yes and I used it to replace one of the refs which died
The "Guest stars" section should be "Recurring and Guest stars" section. Done
The series was retroactively added to the Arrowverse after he guest-starred in the Arrow season-four episode "Haunted". - unrelated to Legends of Tomorrow. Done
Does ref 106 cover the adjacent statement. - Done
- yes combined
In the ratings table eps 8, 9 and 11 should be linked to the ratings section in their episode articles. Done
In the "Critical response" section,
- Use the {{Rotten Tomatoes prose}} template for the first sentence. Done
- Merge second and third paragraphs. Done
- Move Virgona praised the season's transition from science fiction to fantasy. to the second+third merged paragraph. Done
- Rewrite the fourth paragraph. Done
Format the last part as following, Partly done (General refs dropped)

== References ==
=== Explanatory notes ===
{{notelist}}
=== Citations ===
{{reflist}}
=== General references ===
== External links ==

Vestrian24Bio 11:40, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

EARWIG shows 28.6% - violations unlikely.
Concerns from previous failed GAN answered.
Link Dispenser found,
- 1 potentially spam ref.
  - Bleeding Cool is reliable
- 11 refs needing archive links. Done

@OlifanofmrTennant: once all these have been answered I will do a spot-check. Vestrian24Bio 12:06, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Vestrian24Bio: done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 14:34, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@OlifanofmrTennant: 6 points remain. Vestrian24Bio 04:05, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Vestrian24Bio: done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 19:30, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Use {{multiple image}} for Darvill and Noble. Vestrian24Bio 01:52, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Also, link Legends of Tomorrow in the awards table. Vestrian24Bio 02:03, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Vestrian24Bio: Done and done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 02:08, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

All done, will pass the GA. Vestrian24Bio 02:09, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Final review

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